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Maria Carmen*19*

*this goes to my sister Jalice, Dancing Machine, Kelly, Maria, Sarah, Kylee, Lilly, Carmen and of course MJ!!! Love ya babe!!!*
    Michael Jackson
How could this happen to my little girl. As I sit in her hospital room I canâ??t help but sob. Who ever did this to her will pay. Benny told me when me and Jalice made it to the hospital the person who shot her was someone who I knewâ?¦Kelly told me it was Tatiana. Maria Carmen is in a coma because of her...my little girl. Jalice was pacing back and forth in M.C.'s room. Kelly is conferting Maria and Sarah. and Emmueal is holding M.C.'s left hand while i'm holding her right. she looked so helpless just lying there motionless. the bullet mange to hit her in the back and when she fell she banged her head putting her into a coma.
  i squeezed her hand. it was limp...just dangling if you held it. it was hours on hours when the nurse came back. she told us we can't all stay here. bt i wasn't going to leave my baby girlin this condestion.
(Me):you all go. all stay here with her. night and day.

(Jalice):baby...you have to come back home.

(Emmanueal):Mike...your my best friend and i'll stay with her.

(Me):thanks EL....but i'm staying here with my little girl.

(Jalice):are you sure baby?

(Me):very sure.

(Jalice):okay. Kelly i'll take you and the girls home. Emmanueal do you want me to take you home, sweetie?

(Emmanueal):sure. bye Michael.*goes over and kisses M.C. on her cheek*i know you can't here me, babe, i love you...get better...please.
  Emmanueal went with Jalice and the girls. i told Benny to drive them. when they left i went back to my little girl. she was paler then before. her clear blue eyes were shut. i can't stand to see my little girl like this. seeing her just lying there...she isn't the burst of joy or the fireball i know that is always rnning around...and being hyper then a teen should be. she's just a corpse...lying in a tomb. i squeezed her hand hoping that she wold wake up soon. please M.C. wake up. yo and Jalice are the best things that ever happen to me. don't leave us. it was almost a whole year till we came back to the hospital. Janet came with us this time. the doctor told me and Jalice, and Janet to come with him into Maria Carmen's room.
(Doctor):Mr. and Mrs. Jackson, Ma'am...we have some bad news for you...it's been almost a year and your daughter hasn't come out of her coma. and i know her food supplay and her IV is keeping her with us...but it's time maybe...we should pull the pull.

(Jalice):what?*covers her mouth crying*no....no...please not that...

(Janet):*hugs Jalice crying herself*
   i went over and sat down beside my little girl. how can this happen. they can't take her away from me...please not her. not now. Janet took Jalice out of the room to leave me with her. i took hold of her hand. i leaned up to her ear and whispered this in her ear.
(Me):baby girl, please wake up. don't do this. don't leave me. your my little girl...please i'm begging you. wake up. please...open your eyes...move...please do something that tells them that your able to wake up...please baby. don't leave daddy. i love you so much. don't leave. please don't leave.

(Doctor):Mr. Jackson...we have to pull the plug on her...i'm sorry.

(Me):*voice breaking*i understand doctor.
   as i started getting up i felt what i hoped for...i felt Maria Carmen squeezing my hand. i looked down to see her eyes about to open. she opened them slowly. tears fell as they opened. she turned to me.
(Maria Carmen):daddy.*starts crying*daddy...i love youâ?¦so much.

(Me):*hugs her*I love you too, baby girl. I will never lose you again.
      Jalice and Janet came over and hugged her. We were all crying. Later Kelly, Maria, Sarah, and Emmanueal came also and saw she was awake. They were happy. Kelly, Maria and Sarah couldnâ??t help but cry. Emmanueal came over and kissed my little girl on her lips. Again to me as a father I really donâ??t know about itâ?¦but I have my baby girl back. When everyone was talking she turned her head to me and smiled and mouthed out â??I heard you. And I love you, too, daddyâ??. I mouthed out â??I know. Love you moreâ??.
    She came home 2 weeks later. And now sheâ??s 16. Now my baby is grown so much. That night on her first day I went into her room. I saw the moonlight shine on her door. I went to her room and saw her sleeping peacefully back at home. I never want that to happen to her again. I whispered this to her:
 (Me):I love you baby girl.
     As I walked away I heard her voice say this:
(Maria Carmen):daddy love you more.
   *There was part 19!!! Part 20 is on the way!!! Love you all!!!*
-Caitlyn:)

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