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Maria Carmen*10*

Maria Carmen*10*
*this goes the people who loves my story. And Iâ??m not quiteing it. This chapter is the one we all know Joeâ??s idea leaves up to*
    1984
Maria Carmen
    Daddy had that thing with Marly, Jack, Ran, Jamie, Tit today. Itâ??s for my favorite drink everâ?¦pepsei. Jan says I drink it to much now. Itâ??s something to do with â??Billie Jeanâ??. they did this 3 or 4 times now. So I know what it is. The beat starts then the explotions. Daddy dances little while signing coming down the steps. I got up and started walking around. When I was almost to where I normally go I heard the beat then the loud noise go off to quick. And this was the 5th time. I turned around to see daddy running down the steps with his hair smoking. He was spinning around. I saw flames in his hair while he was doing that. Then the next thing I know everyone was surrounding daddy. I was scared. What was going on with daddy? Is he hurt?
     (Me):*calling*Daddy!?*crying*da..dd..y?

(Marlon):whereâ??s Maria?

(Randy):someone find Maria.

(Me):*still crying*Marlyâ?¦.Ranâ?¦Daddy!?

(Jermaine):I found her.*comes over and picks me up still crying*itâ??s okay baby girl.

(Me):whatâ??s wrong with daddy. What happen? His hair was smoking and then he was spinning and I saw fireâ?¦then everyone was surrounding daddy. What happen, Jamie?

(Jermaine):daddy just had a little accident.

(Jackie):I hate to take her out there with her dad to see him like that.

(Marlon):we just canâ??t leave her here.

(Jackie):I know that, Marlon.

(Jermaine):will you 2 shut up. Your upsetting, Maria, even more. And I donâ??t think she needs to cry more then she is now. You all know she hypervenalates when she cries to much. And I donâ??t think we need that on are hands.

(Randy):*runs in*guysâ?¦get Maria Carmen to Michaelâ?¦he wonâ??t go till sheâ??s with him. Jermaine give her to me and Iâ??ll run her to him.*Jamie gives me to Ran*alright Mariaâ?¦you have to be a big girl when you see daddy.

(Me):why? Is he hurt.

(Randy):yesâ?¦but heâ??s gonna be okay.
 
(Me):okay.
     Randy ran me to the people who had my daddy. When I saw daddy I started crying because he had burns on his face and his head was bandage up. Daddy told Randy to place me on the bed he was on. Randy did that and ran back out to the others. Then the people in the back with us closed the door and we took off. I was still crying. I hid my face in daddyâ??s chest. He was rubbing my hair down. Trying to calm me.
  (Daddy):itâ??s okay baby girl. Daddyâ??s gonna be alright.

(Me):*crying harder*utâ?¦ourâ?¦urtâ?¦addy.

(Daddy):daddy knows heâ??s hurt but I want you to be a brave girl okay. Daddyâ??s gonna be okay. Heâ??ll be better before you know it. Okay?

(Me):okay, daddy.
     We made it to the hospital in no time flat. I had to wait in the hallway while daddy went into his room. I saw nana and Joe rush into the hallway.
(Nana)*hugs me*Oh, baby, Iâ??m sorry you saw that.

(Me):itâ??s not your fault, nana.*looks at Joe and points*itâ??s his!!

(Nana):Maria Carmen. Stop. Accidents happen. Joe didnâ??t know that would happen.

(Me):stop protecting him, Nana!! You angrwey with im to!! And you wonâ??t show it! I hate him! Iâ??ll never forgive him for putting my daddy through that!! And I bet he doesnâ??t even care that daddy is in there!

(Joe):Iâ??m sorry. But your daddy is my son andâ?¦heâ??s my son.
     Joe went into daddyâ??s room first when we could see him. We talked to him for a whole hour. I wanted to stay but I had to stay with Nana and Joe till daddy got out of the hospital. It was months till daddy got out. I didnâ??t know that they had a surprize for meâ?¦I didnâ??t know that daddy was there. I was sitting in the leaving room coloring. I was reaching for the red but my daddy had it. I turned around and saw it wasnâ??t there and then I saw his shoes. I looked up and there he was smiling. But his head was still bandage up.
(Me)*screaming jumping up tackling his legs*DADDY!!! YOUâ??RE HERE!!!

(Daddy):hi baby. I missed you. Ready to go home?

(Me):yeah!
    Daddy picked me up and kissed my cheek. I kissed his back. I hugged him around the neck. Like that saying goes: When you love someone you never want them to go away and leave you all alone.
    Me and daddy made it back home. That night I did my pray. Daddy was watching me.
(Me):god is great. God is good. I bless you for every day you give to me and I bless you for bringing daddy back to me. Amen.
   I laid down and placed my head on daddyâ??s chest. Daddy put he hand of the arm I was laying on behind my head and placed his other hand around me. I feel asleep in no time. When Iâ??m with daddy I fall asleep really fast. I love him so much. I never want nothing like this to happen to him that will hurt him ever again.
   *there was part 10!!! Part 11 is coming soon. Love you guys!!!*
-Caitlyn:)

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