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Diamond In The Rough (part3) ByMyaNekol

Sup everyone thank you for the support. I think you'll really enjoy this one. Enjoy!
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~Ilyana's Point Of  View~

Michael: Wake up Ilyana. It's time to go.
Me: Huh? Oh *(smiling)* Don't look at me. In the mornings I look like a monster.
Michael: No you don't you look like an angel.*(moving my hair)*
Me:*(blushing)* Gees, Thank You. 
Michael: *(awkardly)* Well then. We'd better get going.

Michael left the room. I'm such an idiot. Ahhh! I should've freshened up. Whatever I'll have everything I need once we go over to Jarome's. What am I talking about! Jarome is pretty aggressive. I don't want Michael to be in harms' way because of me. Maybe Jarome will be easy going this time around.

On the ride there Michael looked so uncomfortable as we rode around the projects. Jarome's house was at the very end of the roughest neighborhood. Here we are pulling up in a sleek limosene. I hope no one trys to rob Mike's limosene. Trust me it's possible.

Me: Michael let me go in first. You know since he doesn't know that I'm with you.
Michael: Oh alright.

The door flew open.

Jarome: Where the hell you been? Yo lil' skank ass. I know you was out wit some crackhead nigga. *(slapping the back of Ily's head)* Now get you Mexican ass in here!
Ilyana: Ow. Listen Jarome please. I need to... *(taking a deep breath)* I need to get my things. I've found a new place to stay.
Jarome: *(shocked)* Oh is that so. 
Ilyana: Stay there Jarome. Please I don't want any trouble.
Jarome: Fine. Let me get it for you.

I was shocked when Jarome offered to help. Jarome walked to the halway closet got my things and brought them to the front room. He got a suitcase and evrything.

Jarome: So you wanna go. Huh?
Ilyana: Yes. Thank you for your help but I really gotta go.

I reached down to zip up the suitcase when.... when FIRE!!!
This maniac iz had set all my belongings on FIRE!!! What am I going to tell Michael?

Jarome: *(SCREAMING)* IF YOU WANNA LEAVE, YOU LEAVE WITH NOT A DAMN THING! YOU HEAR ME! ALL THE SHIT I'VE DONE FOR YO STANK'N ASS! COME HERE!!!

Jarome lunged at me with rage in his eyes. I tried to run but he snatched be and threw me down. He kicked my side repeatedly. Punching my chest and kicking me I just started cyring histarically. He had never done me like this. I don't know what to do! I just Screamed and SCREAMED. Louder and LOUDER!

Jarome: SHUT UP BITCH!!!!
Ilyana: *(screaming thorugh tears)* STOP IT! PLEASE!
                                !!!!!!!!!MICHAEL!!!!!!!
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~Michael's Point Of View~

Something was up. Ilyana has been in there way to too long. When Jarome answered the door I knew he would yell at her but this was too much. On top of that the house was.... Smoking? 
The house was SMOKING!!!

I jumped out of the car. I had to get Ilyana. I ran into the house. There she was getting the crap beat out of her by that filthy bastard. Jarome! 
He slapped her, punched her, kicked her. How could he do that?!!?!!?! I'm soo FURIOUS! I can't watch this!!!!
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~Ilyana's Point of View~

I looked over to see Michael running full force towards Jarome.
What're you doing Michael? 
 
DAMN!!!!!

Michael punched the shit out of Jarome. Dizzle! HAHA!
Michael did'nt waste a second. He snatched me up and carried me bridal style out of the house. I looked back and saw Jarome on the floor in shock. His nose! It's busted. He deserved it. 
I stick out my tongue at him. How childish am I.

We dive into the limo and speed off.

Michael:*(breathing slowly)* He did'nt even get your face. Huh.
Me:*(faintly smiling)* Was he supposed to? But Michael. You saved me.
Michael: *(smiling)* It was a sucka punch. Trust Me.

We burst out laughing. It was amazing how the two of us could laugh after the just went down. He is so unique. Him taking in a little Hispanic girl form Chile into his world. I pray for Jarome but life with Michael is gonna be so different for me. I'm just a diamond in the rough, but Michael's gonna shine me up and put me on display. *(smiles)*

Michael: Look at me. *(holding up my chin)* I already know that you are special to me. And I just wanted to tell you that       *(smiling)* Your beautiful.
Me: Your to much.
Michael: I mean it. I do, but... *(taking a deep breath)* Theres some one else.
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I really felt alot of emotions while I was writing this one. So I hope you guys felt it too. I also hope that you Enjoyed every word of this. It may not be my best work but i'm proud of it.

For me to post PART 4 of "Diamond In The Rough" this parts requires 8+ votes. Thank you.     :^)

-MyaNekol

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