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Competing For Love Part 1
Hey, its Breyonna! Im starting a new story tonight cause I kept thinking about it all day. Hope you like it! Dedicated to MJ and MJSite. I stood outside the huge mansion, waiting for him to arrive. Myself and 29 other girls were picked to be here for him, and only 1 of us would be his lover. Im Maryse Pacino. My dad is Al Pacino, you probably know him from Scarface when he said "Say hello to my little friend". That's my daddy! Im half French and half Italian, but I speak english really well cause I've been in america since I was 6. Im 27 now. Anyway, We waiting outside until a limo drove up in front of us. He's here! Almost immediately the 29 other girls started fixing their hair, putting on lipgloss, and lifting their boobs higher. I just stood there, waiting to see his beautiful face. Out the limo, his brother, Marlon. We gasped or cheered when we noticed him. Marlon:Hello, ladies. Us:Hi! Marlon:Im pretty sure you allknow me, but if you don't, Im Marlon Jackson. Im here to help my brother find love and its gonna be with one of you beautiful ladies. So, who's ready to meet who ya'll came here for? Us:(cheers and screams) Finally, he got out of the black limo and his gorgeous face appeared, but the only problem was he was wearing glasses and I couldn't see his eyes. Besides that, he was to die for! Michael Jackson is always to die for anyways. I love him already. He walked towards us and started examining our bodies and looks. This is how I look: http://img.visualizeus.com/thumbs/08/08/04/eyes,female,portrait,woman,beautiful,girl-c46496fb35a7c154f3d3e91a42a552b2_h.jpg Do I look like his type? That's for you to judge, but for me to find out. He looked at us and back at Marlon then back at us and...back at Marlon! Michael:I like what I see. Marlon:(smiles)I knew you would, playa. Michael:Do ya'll know how beautiful ya'll are? Us:Yeah! Michael:Woo! I love it already. Marlon:There's one problem. Michael:What? Marlon:There are 30 girls, but only 25 beds. Us:Awww! Michael:So, there will be a challenge to do right now. Marlon:Follow us. We followed Michael and Marlon to the back area when I seen 6 colored buckets, a bunch of eggs, and 25 colored flags. What the hell are we gonna do? Marlon paired us up into 6 teams. My team mates were Ashley, Jess, Tamka, Lucie and myself. We were the green team. I knew their names cause while we were in the front, all of the girls got to know each other alittle. My team mates were the nice girls so I think we will become friends. Michael:Ok, this is what you'll do. One person from each team will run up there and grab one egg, and balance it on your head without breaking it back to your team mates and put the egg in your buckets. If you broke the egg, you will have to back and get another. Once you put the egg in the bucket, another team member will run up by the eggs and grab your color flags and bring it back. Then another member will get an egg and so on. Whoever team gets the most eggs in the bucket and flags, wins this challenge. Marlon:1...2...3...Go! My team mate, Jess, was the first one to run up and get an egg. She turned around and put the egg on her head and carefully walked back towards us. I hope she doesn't drop it! Jess was a few feet away from us, the egg fell off her head, but in her hand. She put the it back on her head and made it to us, and put it in the green bucket. Tamka run by the eggs and grabbed a green flag and ran back to us. I was next so I darted and took an egg and put it on my head. Please don't let me drop it. I was walking quickly, but not too fast to drop it. I put the egg in the bucket, and Lucie ran to get the flag. This went on for about 3 minutes and none of us dropped the egg.....Until Ashley went up. Soon as she put it on her head and started walking, the egg dropped and she went back, then it dropped again!! I already know we're not gonna make it. A horn blew and we all stopped. Marlon:Put down the eggs, and stop running! He walked by all of our buckets and counted our eggs and flags. The only thing going on in my mind was please let us win! Marlon:The red team has 15 eggs and 14 flags, the blue team has 14 eggs and 12 flags, the yellow team has 16 eggs and 15 flags. Michael:The orange team has 17 eggs and 18 flags, the pink team has 18 eggs and 16 flags, and the green team has- Me:(crosses my fingers) Michael:22 eggs and 22 flags. Congradulations! Me:(jumps up)YES!! Jess:Woo-hoo! We did it. Marlon:Congrats green team. The blue team, Im sorry, but you lost this challenge. You have to leave now. The girls on the blue team were really upset they had to leave early. Michael gave them a hug before they left, but one girl refused to hug him. Rude much! Well at least Im still here! Marlon:Ok, you ladies are staying, but there still will be elimination tonight. Tamka:Seriously? Marlon:Yes, but until then we want you to enjoy yourself. Do whatever want, but don't trash the house or turn in to a lesbo. Lucie:Lets get drunk! We all walked/ran into the house and the inside was absolutely gorgeous. The most beautiful place I've seen. (It looks like the mansions that be in the love shows on vh1) Everybody was at the bar exept me and this other girl who was still outside sitting by the pool. Girl:Hi, Im Yvette. Me:Im Maryse. Yvette:Nice name. Me:Thanks. So, what do you think of the girls here? Yvette:Some of them are nice, but I've met some bitches. Me:What about me? Yvette:No, you're cool. Me:Who are the bitches? Yvette:Mickie, Nikki, and Vicki. Me:(smiles)Their name makes them sound like bitches. Yvette:(giggles)Yeah, the bitchy clic. Yvette and I were talking for a while and we became friends. We were talking about who should win when Michael walked up, and sat between us. Michael:Hello, beauties. Yvette:Hola, papi. Michael:Oh, you speak spanish. Muy caliente, mamacita. Me:Hey, Mike. Michael:Hi. You're the one that won the challenge, right? Me:Yep. Michael:Congrats. You should get a special prize. Me:(bites my lip)Like what? Michael:Well- Yvette:Hey, Im still here! Michael & Me:Sorry. Yvette:So, what are you looking for in a girl? Michael:Im mainly looking for someone who's sexy, has a sense of humour, and good with kids. Me:(smiles)Sounds like me. Michael:Ok, you win again. Yvette:I think I should let you two talk. (walks away) Michael:I love your accent. Me:Thank you. Michael:Im guessing you're french. Me:Close. And Italian. Michael:Awesome. Oh, I never got your name. Me:Im sorry. Maryse Pacino. Michael:(smiles)I love your name. Its unique to me. Me:(blushes) Michael:Well, Im gonna go meet the other girls. It was nice meeting you. Me:You too. Michael:(kisses my cheek) AHHH! He kissed me! Stay cool. It was just a peck on the cheek. AHHH! *Elimination time* All of us stood up in the the elimination room, waiting for Marlon and Michael to enter. When they did, I just wanted them to talk fast and get this over with cause Im soo nervous! Michael:Good evening, ladies. Us:Hi. Michael:I've had the pleasure of meeting all of you today, but unfortunately one of you will have to go. Firstly, I want Patricia to come down here. Patricia:(walks to him) Michael:I picked you first cause I felt a connection with you the minute our conversation started. So, Im gonna ask you....Will you accept this chain? Patricia:(smiles)Yes! Michael:(puts the chain around her neck) Patricia:(kisses his cheek) 23 girls later Why am I in the bottom two? I thought we kinda hit it off by the pool, but to him I guess we didn't. Now its between Nikki and myself. Yvette was right. She is a bitch. I tried talking to her earlier, but lets just our convo didn't end well. Im standing here preparing for my heart to get broken. My hands started sweating, which never happens. Michael:Ok, I saved the best for last. The next girl Im gonna call down is someone I like alot. You're sweet and shy and funny. Me:(looks down at my hands) Michael:Maryse, will you come here please? Me:(walks towards him)Don't scare me like that. Michael:(giggles)Im sorry, I couldn't resist. Will you accept this chain? Me:No. Michael:What? Why? Me:(smiles)Gotcha! Michael:Gosh, I almost had a heart attack. Me:Of course I will accept your chain. Michael giggled at me and put the chain around my neck. The chain was gold and it has a pendant of Michael on it doing the toe stand with a little heart in the middle. We kissed each others cheek and I hugged him. Michael:Nikki, Im sorry, but I didn't feel a vibe between us at all. Im so sorry it ended this way. Nikki:Its ok, I understand. (glares at me) Me:(mouths)Bye-bye. Nikki:(leaves) Marlon:Ok, ladies, you can celebrate if you want and we'll see you tomorrow morning. Michael:Goodnight, beauties. Us:Goodnight, Michael! I didn't feel like celebrating cause I always go to sleep early. My dad got me doing that. Plus I wanna be energized tomorrow for Michael. I went upstairs and changed my clothes and slipped into bed. Can't wait to see Michael tomorrow! To Be Continued.......... *Its All For Love, L.O.V.E*
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