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Maria Carmen*11*

*i decided to do it tonight. this goes to my sister Jalice and everyone on here!!!! Soory if I skipped a few years but I had to go on to this era. Me likey!!! Okay here we go!!!*
1987(Bad era!!! OMG!!!)
  Michael Jackson
Man the years have went by so fast for me and my little girl. she's growing up right before my own eyes. i'm working on my newest song for my Album, Bad. and the name of the song is called â??The Way You Make Me Feelâ?? .Maria Carmen is really like her mother with the looks. She still hasnâ??t asked that. She acts like her also. Sweet, funny, hyper, giddy, and everything else that is good.
    Maria Carmen has been doing her own things. She still hasnâ??t made her own song that she and my brother Marlon joke about. She is a very good dancer. Guess sheâ??s been watching her daddy to much. And thatâ??s the thing she still calls me that and sleeps with me. Maybe I should bye her a bed to put in the room that was always ment to be her room but I never used it. Sheâ??s now 7. She a bit tanner then she once was. Butâ?¦she doesnâ??t tan a lot when sheâ??s outside.
    I had my hair in a ponytail and my clothes(I have no idea what their called but everyone knows what he wears in the video). Maria Carmen was getting ready I heard her singing my song â??Badâ??.
(Maria Carmen):
They say the skyâ??s the limit
And to me itâ??s really true
But my friend you ainâ??t seen nothing
Just wait till I get through
Because Iâ??m bad
(bad)
Iâ??m bad
(bad-really really bad)
And the whole world as to answer right now
To tell you once again whoâ??s bad!?
     I had to laugh at my girl. Sheâ??s always loved that song for some reason. Maybe she wants to so the whole world how whoâ??s bad. I knocked on her door. She turned around and saw me. I know I saw a blush go on her face.
(Maria Carmen):hi daddy.

(Me):hey, baby. Ready to go?

(Maria Carmen):almostâ?¦but I need to fix my hair. Can you help. I want pigtails.

(Me):hand me the brush.
     She handed me everything she needed. I fixed her hair and what she asked me shocked me.
(Maria Carmen):daddy? Why am I white?

(Me):umâ?¦because most of the people in are family devleop a skin thing like daddy has. So you probably got from me.

(Maria Carmen):oh. Okay.
     I always hated lieing to her. But what Iâ??m I going to say because your not my real daughter and Jalice is your real mother? And that we took you in as a small baby and I kept that from you for 7 years? No Iâ??m not. Iâ??ll tell her the truth when the time comes. And I hope that will be laterâ?¦so much later that Iâ??ll forget and we can stay this happy father and daughter pack. I finished her hair and we were off. I was going to show M.C. Tatiana. The girl who coplays in it. When we got there I found her and introduced them.
(Me):Tatiana this is my little girl, Maria Carmen. M.C. this is Tatiana.

(Maria Carmen):nice to meet you, Miss. Tatiana.

(Tatiana):you too, Maria Carmen.

(Me):well Iâ??ll be right back. Okay you guys?

(Tatiana):okay Michael.

(Maria Carmen):okay daddy.
      I left to leave them talking. Before I knew it Maria Carmen ran into me. She hid her face in my leg. I looked down to see what she was doing.
(me):M.C. whatâ??s wrong?*she looks up at me and unhold my leg*

(Maria Carmen):I hate, Tatiana!!!

(Me):thatâ??s not nice, baby. Why donâ??t you like Tatiana?

(Maria Carmen):because she says Iâ??m not your real daughter and half of the things they say about you is my fault and that you should of got reid of me when you a chance to.
(Me):WHAT!!!? WHERE IS SHE!!!?

(Maria Carmen):*points to where Alex is*over there.
      I grabbed hold of her hand and stormed off to find Tatiana!!!
   (here what happen)
Maria Carmen
    Daddy just left me with Tatiana. I didnâ??t really like how she looked. Sheâ??s pretty but I didnâ??t like how she looked. She turned to me arms crossed with a arched eyebrow looking me up and down.
(Tatiana):I donâ??t know why Michael wanted you for a daughter. I think he should have left you at that Jackson concert.
(Me):what? Iâ??m daddyâ??s little girl.

(Tatiana):listen sweetie boo, your daddy isnâ??t your real daddy. He found you and if your daddy wasnâ??t so nice and caring he would have listen to his father dropped you off at another family. And I my point I think he should. Half of the things they say about Michael is because of you. And that one thing they said is this when you were no more then a 18month old. â??Jackson seen with secert loverâ??s babyâ??. and you know whatâ?¦thatâ??s your fault. You little brat.

(Maria Carmen):*balling my fist up*listen I thought you were niceâ?¦but now I see the ugliest thing ever in you. Your stupid personality!!! And you know whatâ?¦my daddy loves meâ?¦and Iâ??m sorry no one love you! But you leave me and my daddy alone. And you know what I have no idea why people call you pretty because you are the ugliest thing I have ever saw in my life.*runs to daddy leaveing Tatiana with a dumb look on her face*
    I know who to take up for my ownself at times. I ran to daddy and I grabbed hold of his leg. I wanted to him to hear what the witch lady said to me.
(Daddy):M.C. whatâ??s wrong?*I look up at him*

(Me):I hate Tatiana!!

(Daddy):thatâ??s not nice, baby. Why do you hate, Tatiana?

(Me):because she says Iâ??m not your real daughter and half of the things they say about you is my fault and that you should of got reid of me when you a chance to.

(Daddy):WHAT!!? WHERE IS SHE!!?
 
(me):over there.*points to her talking to one of daddyâ??s dancers*
     Daddy took hold of my hand walking to where that witch is. When we found her she was talking to daddyâ??s-I have no idea what you call them dancers but daddy says not to say that word because Iâ??m not old enough to say it but it starts with a G I know that-dancers, Alex. I smirked holding my daddyâ??s hand. This will be so good. This witch his getting what she needs.
TBCâ?¦â?¦â?¦â?¦â?¦â?¦â?¦â?¦â?¦â?¦â?¦â?¦.........................................
    *This was part 11 and Iâ??ll have part 12 up 2marrow for sure after school. Love you all*
   -Caitlyn:)
PS:i gotta go guys. part 12 will be here 2marrow afternoon. love you guys!!!

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