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Finding Out LaToya's Secret Part 4

*Sidenote:This chapter goes to my husband Michael(lolz), this also goes to a number of people: Aidrenne, Brittany, Katrina, Hannah, Natalie, Secret(lolz), Dede, and Julie A
I also want to dedicate this to all the readers and the writers of mjsite...oh and I was just reading Part 3 over the other day for the 1st time and I realized that I made a big mistake...I wrote something that said : "Well I was there long enough to know that Hazel needs to laugh"....it was suppose to be: "Well I was there long enough to know that Hazel needs to keep an eye on you"....I don't know what I was thinking...lol

Im about to go to Toya's House so that we can get ready for the school dance together...im suppose to be helping her will her makeup, help her pick out her outfit, and help her straighten out her afro for the FIRST TIME...I asked my mom to drop me off and I thought she would take her forever like it usually does...I didn't even rush her this time and she's ready early...the only time I don't want to go she is on time...I didn't feel like going because its been 2 weeks since the kitchen incident and me and Michael haven't been talking as much as we usually do!!...as soon as he sees me come into the house he comes up with some dumb excuse to leave the room...im starting to think that he doesn't like me and just can't tell me but I want him to talk to me or tell me soon because the more he doesn't talk to me and the more he avoids me...the angrier I get....
So we are outside and im sitting in my moms car just looking at the door to Jackson house then my mom says "What's wrong with you?"
(Me)(lying)"Im fine"
(My mom)"You sure??"
(Me)"Yeah...well let me go and help LaToya get ready"
(My mom)"Bye baby girl"
(Me)"Bye mom"
I give my mom a hug then get out the car...I wait her to drive off then go knock on the door...Michael opens the door for me
(Me)"Hey"
He doesn't say anything to me...he just stands there
(Me)"Um...can I come in?"
(Michael)"Oh im sorry"
(Me)(rolling my eyes)"Uh huh"
I love Michael as a friend and I would like him as a boyfriend but wow...what is the matter with him...he used to talk to me about everything now he acts like im a stranger
We walk into the living room...Jackie, Jermaine, and Toya are there...LaToya runs up to me and starts shaking me by my shoulders
(LaToya)(yelling)"Where have you been...I thought you said you that you would be here at 3?"
I remove LaToya's hand from my shoulders then grab Jackie's wrist to look at his watch
(Me)"LaToya its 3:03 only plus the dance starts at 8"
(LaToya)"For Real??"
(Me)"Yeah!..and I would have been here at 3 but I had some trouble at the door"...then I turn around and look at Michael
(LaToya)"What are you talking about??"
(Me)"Nothing...you ready to get your hair done"
(LaToya)"Yeah im so anxious...do u wanna do it in here or in my room"
(Me)"In here is fine"
We got a chair and I sat Toya down and started to comb through LaToya's afro first....I noticed Michael sat down on the couch
(Me)(in my head)"Maybe things are getting better because he hasn't left the room yet"
(LaToya)"So have you picked the guy that you wanna go with to the dance"
(Me)(sighing)"Yeah"
(LaToya)"Awww why so sad??"
Michael starts yawning "Im tired...im gonna take go take a nap"
(Jermaine)"Didn't you just wake up like two hours ago"
Michael elbows Jermaine in his side said and "Well bye everybody"
(Me)(in my head)"I guess I spoke too soon"
(LaToya)"So tell me why your so sad"
(Me)"I don't wanna go to this dance...can we just skip it and go to the movies"
(LaToya)"My date is Jerome Parker...the football captain...do you know how cute he is?"
(Me)"Yeah"
(LaToya)"That means we have to go to the dance but you can still vent and tell me why you've been so upset"
(Me)"Im upset because I don't wanna go with my date"
(LaToya)"Who did you choose?"
(Me)"Ray Lewis"
(LaToya)"Jerome's best friend Ray?...the quarterback of the football team!...he cute and he has a nice personality...so what's wrong??"
(Me)"Well I called him this morning and he sounded all desperate...as if he was waiting my the phone for me to call"
(LaToya)"Well then go with a guy that you really like"
(Me)"I wish it was that easy"
(LaToya)"Why isn't it??"
(Me)"Because I like him...I like him a lot...I think that he likes me too but im so unsure"
(LaToya)"Fantasia?"
I ignore LaToya and keep on going "I got so close to finding out if he likes me or not and the opportunity was ripped out of my hands"
(LaToya)"Fantasia?"
(Me)"Now im trying to find out whether he likes me or not and he's avoiding me...like what the hell is going on"
(LaToya)"Fantasia?"
The more I talked...the angrier I got...but I still had more too say "Like does he not like my hair...does he not like the way I look...maybe he doesn't like me...I don't know and im sure but he needs to tell me something and another thing..."
Before I could finish my sentence LaToya yells and grabs my hand
(Me)"What's your problem??"
(LaToya)"With every sentence you combed harder and harder...and the more you combed the more you yanked my head...I wanna help you feel better but not if that includes you hurting me"
I put down the comb and say "Sorry"
(LaToya)"Here's an idea....go beat up on the guy your talking about...im sure if you cause him pain like you just caused me he will NEVER hurt you again...trust me"
(Jackie)"LaToya will you stop all your whining...the story was just getting good...just suck it up and take it like a man"
(LaToya)"Shut up Jackie...1st of all this convo is between me and Fantasia so get out out"
(Me)"No don't kick them out...I need some advice from a man but your brother are all I got"
(Jackie)"See you know nothing LaToya...see she needs...wait was that an insult?"
(Me)"That doesn't matter right now...I need all of you guys help...from a guy's point of view is there something wrong with me...is my hair not straight enough...my lips to big...am I too curvy...am I not curvy enough...what's wrong with me"
(Jackie)"Calm down...he might be nervous or shy...there could be a very very very slim chance that he is really really really..."
(LaToya)"I think said the word really enough...im sure she gets the point by now"
Jackie rolls his eyes at LaToya and says "Whatever LaToya...like I was saying...oh yeah...maybe he is really dumb and doesn't like you back and if he doesn't like you alone...your a great person you'll find someone else"
(Me)"Awwww...I thought you were gonna say something dumb...that turned out to be really sweet"
I gave Jackie a hug but it wasn't anything romantic about it because I don't see that Jackie that won't and I know I never will...
(Jackie)"That's what im here for"
I was enjoying the moment of Jackie being the big brother figure in my life but it was ruined...
(Me)"LaToya do you love your oldest brother?"
(LaToya)"Sometimes why??"
(Me)"If you loved him enough you tell him to get his hand off my leg before he loses his hand and his life"
(LaToya)"Jackie!!" 
(Jackie)(gasp)"How did that get there...bad hand"...he slapped his hand and then acted like he did nothing
(Jermaine)"How dare you take advantage of our friend like that??"
Then Jermaine put one of his arm around me then starting rubbing my arm and takes his other hand and puts it on my leg...
(Me)"Jermaine??"
(Jermaine)"Yeah"
(Me)"If I were you I would keep your hands off of me because I forgot to tell you that me and LaToya hung out with Hazel last weekend" 
(Jermaine)(stuttering)"Y-you did??"
(Me)"Yeah and we talk all the time now....I hate to have to call her tonight and tell her that she gonna need to go shop for a new boyfriend"
(Jermaine)"Oh...um...im gonna be over at that other couch
if you need me"
(Me)(laughing)"That's what I thought"
(LaToya)(laughing)"Wow...come on girl...lets finish my hair in my room"
We laugh at Jackie and Jermaine all the way up the stairs then I hurry up and finish LaToya hair...when I was putting the finishing touches on her hair she was starting to annoy me....I turned her away from the mirror so she couldn't see her hair until I was done
(LaToya)"Can I look now??"
(Me)"No!"
(LaToya)"I need to know what I look like"
(Me)"You've seen yourself before but trust me when Jerome sees you he is gonna love you"

I finally turn her around so that she can see her hair...its like she's falling in love with herself...I have to pry her away from the mirror so that we could get ready...it took us forever to get ready but we were finally ready about a hour before the dance and we still have to meet our dates at the school....Mrs. Jackson wanted to take pics of us before she dropped us off at the school...we were posing by the stairs and Mrs.Jackson was about to snap the pic when Michael came running running down the stairs like a crazy person and bumped into me and LaToya...he fell on me and LaToya was beside us...LaToya was able to get up by herself
(Mrs.Jackson)"Are you okay??"
(Me)"Yeah"
I had to wait for Michael to get up and then he reached out both of his hands to help me...he pulled me...he ended up pulling me too hard and we both fall backwards onto the stairs as Jackie, Marlon and Tito were coming down the stairs
(Jackie)"Michael...Fantasia...what type of nastiness are yall doing on the steps..and with my mother standing there...you guys should me ashamed of yourselves"
Michael gently pushed me forward so I could get up....I could tell he was embarassed
(Mrs.Jackson)"Sigmund Esco Jackson how dare you say something like that in front of me ot about Fantasia"
(Me)(laughing)"Your real name is Sigmund?"
(Jackie)"Shut up"
(Mrs.Jackson)"Im gonna talk to you about that comment later Jackie...but now I have to take the girls to the dance...you girls ready?"
(Me)"No"
(LaToya)"We are ready mother"
(Me)"I don't wanna go to this stupid dance but whatever...bye Michael, Marlon, Jermaine, Tito"...(laughing)"and Sigmund"
Jackie starts chasing me but I run out the house and to Mrs.Jackson's car...when we got outside the school Jerome and Ray were waiting for us
(Me)"Desperate!!"
(LaToya)"Be Nice"
(Mrs.Jackson)"I hope you girls have a good time"
(Me)"Thanks Mrs.Jackson"
(LaToya)"Thanks and good bye mother...see you at 11"
Mrs.Jackson drove off and I wish she would come back and take me back to Hayvenhurst (the encino family compound) but I know that's now gonna happen
(Ray)"Im glad that you decided to come"
(Me)(fake smile)"Me Too"
(Jerome)"So why are we standing out here...lets get to the dance"
The dance last for about 3 hours and I was so happy when it was over...Me and LaToya were outside talking to Ray and Jerome...I was so bored with the conversation..all Ray talks about is football...its so annoying...he was about to lean in for a kiss I turned my head to LaToya and he ended up tongue kissing my ear (Ewwwwwwwwww...lol)
(Ray)"Oooh I didn't mean to do that"
(Me)(wiping my ear)"Um that's okay...I think I see LaToya's mom anyway"
(LaToya)"Where??"
(Me)"Um she's right there...lets walk to the car"
We walk far enough so that Ray and Jerome can't see us...LaToya starts to realize that I lied
(LaToya)"My mom isn't even here...lets go back"
(Me)"No lets stay here...Ray just kissed all up in my ear"
(LaToya)"Ewwww...we can stay here"
We are laughing and joking for about 10 minutes until Mrs.Jackson pulls up to the curb and we get in the car...LaToya tells her all the highlights of the dance on the way home...I just sit and listen until we get home...when we get inside everyone is up...and none of us plan to go to sleep soon so we decide to take a walk....so me, LaToya, Randy, Janet, Michael, Jackie, and Jermaine go but Tito and Marlon decide to stay inside...somehow we all get separated me and Michael end up way in front of everyone
(Michael)"I love walking out here at night"
(Me)"Me too...its so beautiful...I like the..."
(Michael)"Oooh look a shooting star...hurry up and make a wish"
(Me)(in my head)"I wish...um...I wish that Michael would stop avoiding me...I don't care if he can't be my boyfriend...even though I would like it but I want my friend back"
I open my eyes and Michael is just looking at me...we start walking again but after a while I stop
(Michael)"What's the matter??"
(Me)"You know how we made our wishes back there?"
(Michael)"Yeah"
(Me)"Well if you could make my wish come true...would you??"
(Michael)"Of course I would"
(Me)"Well then answer a question for me"
Michael looks worried and puzzled but he still tells me that I can ask him the question
(Me)"Why have you been avoiding me recently?"
(Michael)"Well why were you in the kitchen that day?"
(Me)"Was there something that I wasn't suppose to her?"
(Michael)"Well were you suppose to hearing the conversation in the 1st place?"
(Me)"You know what...forget it"
I walk away from Michael but he catches up to me and grabs my hand
(Michael)"Wait lets start over again"
(Me)"Fine"
(Michael)"To answer your question I was avoiding you because you almost found out how I felt about you and I was about upset about it"
(Me)"Wait...I still don't know how you feel about me"
(Michael)(breathes in)"Well I like you..a lot...I've liked you ever since the day I met you"
(Me)"Really...wait but I still don't understand why your so upset?"
(Michael)"Because your so beautiful, your have a nice body, and you smart"
(Me)"Um Michael I don't see what the problem is"
(Michael)"Your basically perfect and im...well im not"
(Me)(looking at him like he's crazy)"What do you mean?"
(Michael)"I don't think I look good enough to be with you?"
(Me)"What are you talking about...what is it that you don't like about yourself?"
(Michael)"Well um...my nose"
(Me)"I like it!!"
(Michael)"My pimples"
(Me)"I think you look cute with or without pimples"
(Michael)"Well I don't like my..."
(Me)(yelling)"Michael...I like it...I like you...I like everything about you...you might not see the perfection in you but I definitely do"
Michael didn't say anything but he slid his favorite ring off his finger...
(Michael)"Well since you feel that way...give me your hand"
I gave him my hand then he slid his ring on my finger...
(Me)"Michael that's your favorite ring"
(Michael)"I know...Fantasia...I really want you to be my girl but that's not what this ring stands for...I just want you to always remember that even if this relationship doesn't work...I always want you in my life...I always want to by my side even if you just my friend"
(Me)"Awww Michael"

I can't really say anything else...all I want to do is hug him
(Michael)"So is that a yes"
(Me)"Yeah"
We hear everyone else laughing and talking but we know they haven't seen us yet
(Me)"Lets go back into the house"
We run inside the house but we make sure we run a different way so that we don't run into everyone else...it was so difficult to run in the heels that I wore to the dance...when we finally get to the living room me and Michael sit down and start laughing but after a while we calm down
I can't believe that Michael gave me his ring...I keep on playing with it...twisting it around...taking it off then putting it back on...then Michael grabs my hand 
(Michael)"Are you gonna pay more attention to the ring or me?"
I say "Oh im sorry baby" I sit on his lap and wrap my arms around his neck then I start to kiss him....
We are still kissing when the door opens and.......

To be Continued
I didn't like this chapter much but I hoped you did...hopely I will like the next chapter better and im sorry it took so long!!

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