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Bitter Roses Part 1

Well here is the first part to my new story. Hope you guys enjoy it.:)

Recap:This story is about a girl named Brooklyn Amelia Davis. She is 14 years old. When she was 7 years old her mother left and never came back, and before that her father  was on drugs real bad and died of AIDS. She's been in the system for 7 years now.  She is going to be living with Ms.Knight(38) and her two kids Maria (14) and David(16). Oh I almost forgot. Brooklyn has two sisters. Jayden(13)and Alicia(15).  So their all on their way to Ms.Knight's house.
*In the car*
Alicia:I hope we actually get to stay here for good.
Jayden:Yeah me too.
Alicia:How about you Brooklyn?
Brooklyn:I reallly don't care. No matter where we go there is always going to be problems.
Jayden:Just have a little hope.
Brooklyn:Hope? In my life there is no damn hope.
Alicia:Watch your mouth!!
Brooklyn:Sorry.
Ms.B:We're here.
So they stepped out the car and the house was so big!!
Brooklyn:Oh my Lord!!!
Jayden:This place must have its own zip code!!
Then Ms.Knight came outside with Maria and David.
Ms.Knight:Hi girls. I am Ms.Knight and these are my kids Maria and David.
B&A&J:Hi
M&D:Hi. Nice to meet you.
Ms.Knight:Come on inside. 
*Walking inside*
Brooklyn:Holy Sh(Gets cut off)
Alicia:Don't even say it.
Ms.Knight:So what are your names?
Alicia:I'm Alicia. I'm the smart.
Jayden:I'm Jayden, and I'm the....the.....short one I guess.
Brooklyn:I'm Brooklyn.
Alicia:She's the funny one.
David: I'm gonna go to Jackie's house and play basketball.  You girls wanna come?
Maria: we'll come later.
David:K See Ya
Ms.Knight:Well I have to go to work.  See you all later. And girls make yourselfs comfortable.*smiles*
Maria:Bye mom. Well.. um...Let me show you to your rooms.
Alicia:Wow. My room is huge.
Jayden:I have my own room.  I don't have to listen to Alicia snore at night anymore.
Brooklyn:*Laughs*
Alicia:I don't snore!!
Jayden:Yes you do. You sound like a donkey in pain. I feel sorry for the guy you marry.
Brooklyn:Who said somebody wanted marry that thang.
Mara:*Giggles* Came on Brooklyn.  You share a room with me.
Alicia:*Glares at us*
Brooklyn:*laughs*
*In Brooklyn and Maria's room*
Maria:So Brooklyn...
Brooklyn:You came call me Brook.
Maria:Ok Brook.  Do you want to go to Jackie's house?
Brooklyn:Sure.
Maria:Go ask you sisters if they want to come.
So Brooklyn went and asked them and they said yes.
To Be Continued.....
Yeah I know it wasn't all that exciting but it will get better.
This story is dedicated to Candice,Caitlyn,Mark,Andrea,Jayden,Alicia,Samone, Maria, and MJ. Thank you liking my stories.  Please tell me what you think of my story, and also vote.  
-Jalice:)  I Love you all!!!!!!!!

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