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You Are My Life 7 (Coma)

Normal P.O.V.

Alana slightly startled as she woke up in total darkness fear struck her heart..Oh God had they buried me alive she put her hands out infront 
of her expecting to feel the soft inner
layer of a casket but felt nothin as far as she could tell she was in some sort of room then she saw a bright light that shone beneath what 
looked like a door she walked towards it almost as if she were drawn to it.

Doctor:The surgery was sucessful but she's in a coma with a very slim
chance of wakin up

Michael entered the room and pulled up a chair next to her bed and took her hand and began cryin.

M:Why her?Why now?please dont leave me

The door began to get farther away from her she walked faster but the door stayed the same as if she hadnt
moved at all she felt her hand tingle
as if someone was holdin it.

M:Dont leave me please
A:Michael..
M:Please be okay Alana
A:Michael where are you
M:Dont leave me..I love you

With those three emotional words she was briefly thrust into total darkness as the lights came clearer she realized they were her memories of her and michael,images
danced around her the laughs they shared,the good times,and first date
this is what its like when your flashes before your eyes before you
die she heard herself laughin,cryin
but what made her throat tighten when mike was holdin her hand.

M:I would never let anything happen to you I will always be there for you no matter what happens.

Alana's P.O.V.

I felt a sheet coverin half my body and a beeping noise that annoyed me
I slowly opened my eyes to see I was
in a hospital room hooked up I felt
someone holdin my hand and looked
over to see mike sleepin I squeezed his hand and he jumped then blinked his eyes and sat up his look turned to the most genuine smile I have seen.

M:Your awake 
A:Ow
M:Im sorry baby
A:How long was I sleep
M:4 days
A:Seemed like 4mins
M:Im glad your ok Ill get the nurse
A:No..just stay with me for a while.
TBC -Kayla

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