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Caitlyn's Notebook Story Part 8

*Hereâ??s the next part to my notebook story. I was so happy people are liking it and donâ??t want me to stop it. Thanks to all the people who likes it. This is almost to the last part of the story. After this Iâ??ll do another one. If you would like. Hereâ??s part 8. Enjoy. And Iâ??m sad to say part 9 is the last partâ?¦sorry. But Iâ??m starting a new one after this one. So again enjoy!!!
  -Caitlyn:]*

Me and Tyler finally made it to the park where we was about to go over the plan. I know he didnâ??t want to be part of itâ?¦but as I said again he was going to anyways. I love doing this to him. Even though he has always hated my ideas...he some how also went with them, no matter what it was. I guess what are best friends for. But, again...I love doing this to him. And he knows it.

(Tyler): so whatâ??s the plan, Hay?
(Me): well, you know the Valentine Ball is 2marrow?
(Tyler): yeahâ?¦and?
(Me): mommy and daddy are bringing Danny and Debbie. And you get numbers and the numbers you have you have to dance with.
(Tyler): and?
(Me): I changed thatâ?¦I gave mommyâ??s and daddy the same number and Debbie and Danny the same number. Butâ?¦thereâ??s some difficulty to it. We have to be in the dance also.
(Tyler): now you know why I hate your plans!!! (starts to get up and leave)

No he didnâ??t!!!! I got up and jumped on him causing him to fall again. We started rolling and we rolled right out of are hiding spot. We rolled and rolled till we felt coldness of water touching are skins. I opened my eyes to see him on top and be on the bottom.

(Me): see, Ty, you know how to tango.
(Tyler): shut up!!!

Me and him was like that for a little bit till he started moving closer to meâ?¦just then a spark when off when I felt his lips on mine. My eyes were wideâ?¦did my best friend really just kiss me? As we parted lips we both was blushing.

(Me): now that you kissed meâ?¦I get payback.
(Tyler): so I have to dance with you?
(Me): after thatâ?¦yes.
(Tyler): dang.

We both started laughing for no reasonâ?¦what are best friends for? It was the day of the Danceâ?¦everyone was there and mommy and daddy was a little shocked that they have the same number. Me and Tyler saw that Debbie and Danny didnâ??t seem to mind that they have to same number. And I saw the heart in mommyâ??s eyes when she saw Danny and Debbie dancing like they were. Me and Tyler was doing a thing with are friendsâ?¦itâ??s â??Dangerousâ?? like my daddy and his friends did on MTV. Mommy and daddy didnâ??t even go near one anotherâ?¦my plan isnâ??t going as well then I thought it would. I looked at Tyler who had a â??I told you it wouldnâ??t workâ?? face. I gave him a face that he knows to well to shut up and think really hard on what heâ??s gonna say. Heâ??s look vanished. We got ready for are group to be known.

(MC): alright. We have some talented kids here tonight. Introducing the â??Thrillerâ?? Squad. With Hayden, Tyler, Kelsion, Tyrike, Darnelle, and Adrienne doing â??Dangerousâ?? with there own mix. Now here they are.

Everyone started clapping and cheering as we came out. The mobster theme came on till we hear rapid fire. Adrienne is the one who mouths out the line from â??Badâ??.

(Adrienne): (mouthing out) you wanna see whoâ??s bad? You wanna she whoâ??s bad. Câ??mon! câ??mon!!!

Then the sound of rapid fire went off again. Everyone gasp when they saw Tyrike and Darnelle on the ground. And Tyler stood there. He was the one who was going to mouth out my daddyâ??s part.

(Tyler): the way she came into the place
I knew right then and there
There was something different about this girl(stomps his foot where Darnelle is)
The way she moved
Her hair
Her face
Her lines
Divinity in motion

The song started to â??Dangerousâ?? and Tyrike and Darnelle got up from the floor.

As she stalked the room 
I cold fill the aura of her presence
Every head turned
Feeling passion and lust

The girl was persuasive
The girl you could not trust
The girl was bad

We got up and pushed are hands out in front of us, then stomped are left foot then looked over are right shoulder.

(All): the girl was dangerous

We started doing everything to my aunt Janetâ??s voice first then to the last one before we got really into it.

(Me): (Mouthing out my Aunt Janetâ??s voice) get the point? Good. Letâ??s dance.

Then we all started dancing. At the end when we finished the whole song me, Adrienne, Tyrike, and Darnelle fall to the ground after have rapid fire put on us. And Tyler staid like my daddy did. Everyone was going crazy for us. Tyler helped me up. We were both out of breath a little. I saw mommy and daddyâ?¦they had got a little closer together. I knew I was tired but I had to get them together againâ?¦and the song they danced to when they first met seems like the right one. It was a song daddy sings around all the time. I started liking around the time I was about 4 or 5 maybe even younger. All I knew it was the song that daddy loved and that mommy lovedâ?¦the MC announced the couple danceâ?¦me and Tyler took the floor first to â??Sheâ??s out of my lifeâ??â?¦I already picked the song smiled for my mommy and daddy. I looked over at my parents as me and Tyler danced to the song. Heâ??s hands was on my waist as my arms was around his neck. Was it really possible for me and Tyler to be a coupleâ?¦I mean Iâ??ve known him ever since I was 3 when  first met him at schoolâ?¦weâ??ve been friends foreverâ?¦in fact beside my family he was my best friend and he was my only friend. Tyler spun me a few times till it got to the end of the song. I hugged him and he hugged me back. Everyone was clapping because it was only me and Tyler dancing. The MC announced that it was mommy and daddyâ??s turn. Me and Tyler stepped to the side and waited to see if â??Smileâ?? will come on. Mommy and Daddy seemed shocked that they was going to dance together again. Mommy looked over at me and I smiled at her. She shrugged and turned back. Then it was daddyâ??s turn. He smiled. I bet he knew it was my idea for this to happen.

(Daddy): (mouthing out) â??I know this was your idea, Hayden.â?
(Me): (mouthing out also) â??I know you do. And your welcome daddy.â?

Him and mommy started dancing. Daddyâ??s hands was wrapped around Mommyâ??s waist and her arms was around his neck. They both seemed lost in there own eyesâ?¦and the song. I smiled. This is turning out great.

(Mommy): I have a feeling are little girl had something to do with thisâ?¦
(Daddy): that she did.
(Mommy): Michaelâ?¦I always wanted to tell you this but I was to afraid tooâ?¦I really do love you Michael and I did want to marry youâ?¦but I justâ?¦I just couldnâ??t do it.
(Daddy): why not. Iâ??ve always told you I loved you and you never said it backâ?¦and when we had Hayden, I thought it would be a great idea for us to make a happy family for us and for her. Why was you scared?
(Mommy): because I thought if you had a kidâ?¦that it would ruin your job and I didnâ??t want you to get in trouble and disappoint any oneâ?¦like your fans. So I thought you didnâ??t need me or Hayden.
(Daddy): have you ever thought I did need you and Hayden?
(Mommy):â?¦..
(Daddy): Kelly, listen, Iâ??ve always needed you and Hayden. If I didnâ??t I would have never wanted to be around you and herâ?¦or even be in her life. But you know I love you and her. And thatâ??s why I want us to be a family. Just as much as herâ?¦
(Mommy): Michaelâ?¦I donâ??t know ifâ?¦
(Daddy): maybe this will change your mind, Kelly. (kisses her softly on her lips)

I smiled big when I saw them kiss. Danny and Debbie looked a little hurt but then something odd happened. They smiled and left together. That was a little strange. I looked over and my mommy and daddy and they had parted and smiled at one another. Daddy got down on one knee with mommyâ??s hand in his.

(Daddy): Kelly Oâ??Breyn, Iâ??ve known you for so long. And Iâ??ve been so stupid to see that my love for you means more tome then this whole world can fill to my heart. We have a beautiful daughter together and I want to be a family just as much as she wants to beâ?¦so as I was about to do in 1985, Kelly will you do me the honor of being my world and my long loving life, Iâ??m asking will you be my wife and still be the mother of my daughterâ?¦are daughter. 
(Mommy): oh, Michael, I will. I will Marry you.

Everyone clapped as mommy and daddy hugged one another and kissed againâ?¦alright the kissing thing is getting a little gross. Tyler came over and handed me a rose. He was blushingâ?¦

(Me): Ty, whatâ??s that for?
(Tyler): Weâ??ve known each other since we were younger and I just wanted to knowâ?¦will you be my girl?
(Me): Tylerâ?¦Iâ?¦
(Tyler): I understand. (starts to walk away)
(Me): (walks in front of him)â?¦(smiles) no you donâ??tâ?¦I love you Tylerâ?¦I was about to say I would love to only I have to get you back.
(Tyler): with what? (smiles)
(Me): with thisâ?¦(lean up and kisses his lips)

We pulled apart and everyone was looking at us. Then mommy and daddy started clapping then everyone did. Me and Tyler was blushing. Sarah Drey was rightâ?¦when you think of the bright side everything will turn your way. Daddy came home with us that night, the next day we moved to Neverland, and I was like my childhood came back. Me seeing Louie the llama and Bubbles the monkey. I turn back to see mommy and daddy kissing again...I made a gagging noises.

(Me): gross guys...I'm still in the room.
(Daddy): (laughing) sorry baby girl...we thought you wasn't.
(Mommy): yeah. Sorry, Hayden, baby.
(Me): (laughing heading up to my room) yeah, sure you guys did. Now I'm going up to my new room...or the room I use when I came over here and place my thigs in here. So you can make out as much as you want.
(Mommy): and to think both me and your father put mash peas into that mouth.
(Me): ewww!!! Gross I ate peas!!!?
(Daddy): that and squash.
(Me): gross!!! Why'd I eat that? Did I have no taste buds as a baby?
(Mommy): no you just loved that baby food. But it was a battle for me to feed you...Then it was for your daddy.
(Me): (laughing)
(Mommy): laugh it up little lady...but one of these days your gonna feel sorry that you was like that to me. You'll have a kid like that also.

I closed my door...so she knew I wasn't listening anymore. The wedding is in two weeks. And I can't wait!!! Finally...we're goign to be a happy family like I've always wanted!!! I went to bed with a smile on my face. It has been two weeks and we have just started getting ready for the wedding...I was so happy. Mommy looked so pretty in white...and daddy was great in a tux also. Lisa was there. And she had a smile on her face as mommy started down the isle. I was the flower girl. Tyler was the ring boy. When it came to there vows i knew it would be the best...both were so heart felt...I was crying. As they got down saying there vows and shared their wedding kiss, I stepped up and got ready for the song i was goign to sing for them. It was the song I working with when the whole Lisa thing was going on. Tyler made the beat. I took a deep breath and looked to my mommy and daddy.

(Me): this song is for you mommy and daddy. I love you guys. And I think this fits how you treated me all through the years.

To Be Continued.......................

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