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I Can Treat You Better...*Part Seven*

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*Still in Michael's P.O.V.*
     I wasn't paying attention to what Melinda was saying because I was just so distracted with her body. 
Melinda: Michael? Michael...(waves hand in my face) Yoo hoo! Michael, back to Earth...
        I still wasn't paying attention to her. I was in my own little world, in my own little fantasies. I fantasized her on the beach, naked, floating in the ocean water, while she was gesturing me to come over to her. "Come on, baby," she was saying. 
Melinda: (snaps fingers) MICHAEL! 
    And finally, I got the hint and I came back to Earth.
Me: (back to reality) OH! (clears throat) Hmm?
Melinda: Your mouth was open. Are you okay?
Me: Of course. (trying not to stare at her breasts)
Melinda: (laughs) Well, let's hang out in the pool.
      We got inside of the pool, and as I was behind her, I kept staring at her behind. I shook it off and got into the pool. For some reason, I wanted to ask her if she had a man in her life, and I was really tempted to, but I didn't want to get too personal...But I couldn't hold it in. It was really bothering me if I didn't ask her. 
Me: Hey, Melinda?
Melinda: (splashes lightly in the water) Yeah?
Me: Uh...don't take this personally, but...d-do you have a boyfriend? 
   As she was about to reply, my mind was playing over and over again, "Please say no. Please say no. Don't say yes."
Me: Yeah. 
     My heart shattered like glass into a million pieces and my stomach literally curled up on me. I really liked Melinda...a lot. She was an extremely gorgeous girl, she had an amazing body, she was so nice to me, and most importantly...she liked me for me. She didn't see Michael Jackson the superstar; she saw Michael Jackson the person. She looked underneath the glove and the red jacket. I liked her very much and just to think that another man was sweeping her off of her feet kills me quite a bit.
Melinda: His name's Rick Chavens, but people call him "RC," because of his intitials, he's 28, he works as a business man in Santa Fe, so I hardly see him. He is very funny, and he's kind of like a bad boy, like a rebel and a roughouser. He uses the biggest amount of hairspray known to man, and he owns like six motorcycles. He's very adventrous, and he's kinda in-your-face. 
     Oh my...the man that Melinda described to me that she was dating kind of reminded me of the guys from "Grease." He didn't sound all that nice to me, but who was I to judge? I mean, he must've been a real gem to have such a pearl like Melinda. I just hoped that he treated Melinda right and if he did, I wouldn't have any problems with him. 
Me: (fake smiles) That's nice...
*In Melinda's P.O.V.*
    I could just tell that Michael wasn't all peachy keen with me telling him that I was with somebody, so I decided to change the subject.
Me: So, uh...wanna have a splash-off?
Michael: (starts to smile) Sure.
     We were splashing hard and loads of water were poured on us. I started to hide under the water and I was swimming under him, but still, he managed to catch me. It was so much fun!

TBC...
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