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Maria Carmen *17*
*here's part 17* 1995 Michael Jackson it's been about 5 years now since that day i told Maria Carmen the truth. she's still happy as ever. now she's grown into a young women at 15. me as a father you never want to lose your baby girl. but Jalice tells me i have to let her go soon. but it's hard to see her growup right infront of me. 15 years ago if i could have kept her that small i would have. now i have to deal with boys, and her...okay i don't even want to go there. anyone who takes that is getting hurt. she keeps telling me to relax because she doesn't have a boyfriend. i'm working on a new album called 'History'. Maria Carmen told me to put 'Little Susie' in it. she did have a point. i told her i'll try. but she should put it in her up coming album 'Children'. she was very happy. i knew that has been her favorite song since she was 9. she had me go to the recording studio with her today. she was going to record 'Children' and 'Little Susie'. i watched my baby girl step into the booth. the music to her song 'Children' came on. she started to sing this: (Maria Carmen): Children of the earth Children of the Furture Children are the furture To you and me i sit in my room wondering thinking believeing that someone will stand up to this evil nasty deviling thing children go through they are crying why do we stand by while some are dying? i don't know why so many has survied today because someone made a change but to those who couldn't escape watch down above us everyday this is why i sing Children are so peacful things they are care free to things me and you find the most troubling and harmaling i see them almost all the time why must half of them die to the evil thing of sin it makes my head spin so many have survived today because some one made a change but to those who couldn't escape watch down above us everyday this is why i sing Children pray for the children pray for their famlies pray for the children who survived pray for the children who died to me this must make a change so we can all keep the Children the furture of you... and the furture of you and... Me she has always hated child abuse. no matter what people would say about it...she would start a fight...saying who ever does that to a child-a peacful angel-should go to hell. and i have to keep telling her not to say that. but she starts to have a fight with me saying she's speaking her mind. i was brought back to Earth when i heard the music i made for 'Little Susie' then Maria Carmen started to sing this: (Maria Carmen): Somebody killed little Susie The girl with the tune Who sings in the daytime at noon She was there screaming Beating her voice in her doom But nobody came to her soon... A fall down the stairs Her dress torn Oh the blood in her hair... A mystery so sullen in air She lie there so tenderly Fashioned so slenderly Lift her with care, Oh the blood in her hair... Everyone came to see The girl that now is dead So blind stare the eyes in her head... And suddenly a voice from the crowd said This girl lived in vain Her face bear such agony, such strain... But only the man from next door Knew Little Susie and how he cried As he reached down To close Susie's eyes... She lie there so tenderly Fashioned so slenderly Lift her with care Oh the blood in her hair... It was all for God's sake For her singing the tune For someone to feel her despair To be damned to know hoping is dead and you're doomed Then to scream out And nobody's there... She knew no one cared... Father left home, poor mother died Leaving Susie alone Grandfather's soul too had flown... No one to care Just to love her How much can one bear Rejecting the needs in her prayers... Neglection can kill Like a knife in your soul Oh it will Little Susie fought so hard to live... She lie there so tenderly Fashioned so slenderly Lift her with care So young and so fair she always crys after she gets done with that song. she stepped out of the booth and came over and hugged me. she may be 15 but you would think she's grown out of her oldself. but your wrong she's still the same little girl she always was. and i wold never change her. on the way home she was telling me about a boy she really likes. and me as a father didn't really want to know...but we were in the limo and i coldn't do anything about it. i told her maybe she should ask her mother then me. (Maria carmen):okay...maybe mama's home from Brittney's. (Me):*thinking*please let her be home. we made it back home. everything was so quite. as me and Maria Carmen was coming in we heard what sounded like glass break and Jalice scream. me and Maria Carmen ran. when we got there we saw a man with Maria Carmen's eye color and hair color. i saw Jalice on the floor holding the side of her face. Maria Carmen ran to Jalice. (Man):well...well if it isn't my little girl. (Maria carmen):what? (Jalice):Maria Carmen...i don't want you to see him... (Man):shut up you B*cth!! she my daughter!!! (Me):what your? her father? (Man):yes!!! and i'm Ethan!!! and as her father i want her back!! (Jalice):she's mine and Michaelâ??s!!! (Ethan):maybe but not for long.*goes over to them. Grabs Maria Carmen by her hair and pulls her up* (Maria Carmen):LET GO!!! (Ethan)*slaps her*SHUT UP!!! I CAN DO WHATEVER I WANT TO YOU!!! I went over and punched Ethan in the face. He dropped Maria Carmen and she ran behind me. Ethan held his jaw. (Me):get out before I call the cops!!! (Jalice):Michael there on their way. (Ethan):move pretty boy! Sheâ??s mine not yours. (Me):sheâ??s been mine for 15 years. Where have you been? (Ethan):fine but donâ??t if anything happens to herâ?¦you knows who fault it is. Just then the cops bust in. (Cop1):FREEZE!!! (cop2):STEP AWAY FROM THE MAN AND THE GIRL!!! Ethan back off and the 3rd cop came and cuffed him. I saw the look he gave me then the look he gave M.C. I turned her away from him. Jalice came to us after the cops dragged Ethan away. I held onto my family. I will never lose them. To anyone like Ethan or someone who is like him. I kissed Jalice and kissed Maria Carmen on top of her headâ?¦grateful they werenâ??t hurt badly. I will never let anyone hurt them again. Ever. *there was part 17!!! Hoped you liked it!!! Part 18 is coming soon!!! Love you guys!!!* -Caitlyn:)
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