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Maria Carmen*14*

*this goes to my sister Jalice and everyone on here encluding Maria Sarah and Morning Glow and Mimi Kelly*
  1989
 Michael Jackson
    Well my baby girl is finally 9 and sheâ??s gonna get to perform soon. But sheâ??s just recorded her first song called â??Oklahomaâ??(I know itâ??s not made yet). And sheâ??s working on a new song but she made Jalice drive her there. And I staid at the house. We were at the awards show today. Jalice was sitting with me. Weâ??ve been going out for awhile now and M.C. couldnâ??t be any happier. I saw Maria Carmen and her friends, Maria, Sarah, and Kelly walk up to the mic. 
    M.C. adjusted the mic to fit her level. Sheâ??s pretty shirt compaired to her friends. She cleared her voice.
(Maria Carmen):I would like to thank everyone who showed up for the awards show. We all know some of the people listed in the music magic out of the 3 people that made it only one is the winner. Sarah take it away.

(Sarah):out of the 3 people who were picked they areâ?¦Diana Ross! Jermain Jackson! And last but not lessâ?¦.

(Maria Carmen, Sarah, Maria, Kelly):Michael Jackson!!!!

(Maria):did that thing really say Jermain Jackson or did you want to say it.

(Sarah):it really says it.

(Maria):let me see then.

(Maria Carmen):guys?

(Kelly):we gotta on with this.

(Sarah):no.

(Maria):let me see it.

(Maria Carmen)*takes the folder*Sarahâ?¦

(Sarah):yes?
(Maria Carmen):thatâ??s my uncle Jackie!

(Sarah):so I got them confussed.

(Maria):how do you get Jackie and Jermain confussed?

(Sarah):it can happen.

(Kelly):yeah on dodo land.

(Sarah):shut up.

(Maria Carmen):anyways. The winner of the music magic awards is no other then?*pulls the letter out*my daddyâ?¦.

(MC,S,K,M):MICHAEL JACKSON!!!
     I went up on stage. Everyone clapped. Even Maria Carmen was clapping. I hugged her and her friends. I adjusted the mic.
(Me):I would like to thank all my loving fans from the years Iâ??ve been singing. And I would love to thank my family and my girlfriend Jalice. And I also want to thank my little girl, Maria Carmen. For being the best daughter anyone could have. And sheâ??s been with me for more then 9 years.

(Maria Carmen):daddy.

(Me):an one thing I want to know does anyone want to hear her new song, â??Oklahomaâ???*everyone cheers*M.C. I think they want you to sing for them.

(Maria Carmen):daddy if didnâ??t love you so much you wouldnâ??t be here right now.

(Me):*hugs her*I know.

(Maria Carmen):alright yaâ??ll want a songâ?¦yaâ??ll got one!!! Hit it please!!!
     Her instermental came up on. And she took the mic that moves around with you and got from behind the booth where you can see her. She stood in front of everyone. Sheâ??s not shy or scared at all when it comes to dancing. Wonder where she got that from?(A/N:ummm? I wonder who? LOL)
     She took in a deep breath. And let it out just in time to sing this:
(Maria Carmen):
Suitcase packed with all his things 
Car pulls up, the doorbell rings 
He don't want to go 
He thought he'd found his home
But with circumstances he can't change
Waves goodbye as they pull away 
From the life he's known
For the last seven months or so

She said we found the man who looks like you 
Who cried and said he never knew 
About the boy in pictures that we showed him 
A rambler in his younger days 
He knew he made a few mistakes
But he swore he would have been there
Had he known it
Son we think we found your dad in Oklahoma

A million thoughts raced through his mind
What's his name, what's he like and will he be 
Anything like the man in his dreams 
She could see the questions in his eyes
Whispered "don't be scared my child 
I'll let you know, what we know

About the man we found, he looks like you 
And cried and said he never knew 
About the boy in pictures that we showed him 
A rambler in his younger days He knew he'd made a few mistakes 
But he swore he would've been there Had he known it 
You always said that this was something that you wanted 
Son it's time to meet your Dad in Oklahoma

One last turn he held his breath 
'Til they reached the fifth house on the left
And all at once the tears came rolling in
And as they pulled into the drive
A man was waiting there outside 
Who wiped the worry from his eyes Smiled and took his hand 
And he said I'm the man who looks like you 
Who cried because I never knew 
About that boy in pictures that they showed me 
A rambler in my younger days I knew I made a few mistakes
But I swear I would have been there had I known it 
Never again will you ever be alone 
Son welcome to your home in Oklahoma
     After she was done singing everyone was cheering and clapping. I saw Jalice was wiping tears from her eyes. Must have never thought Maria Carmen would do what she dreamed. But here she is living out her dream. Iâ??m proud of her. Hard to believe she the same little girl that I took in all those 9 years ago. Thought sheâ??s growing older sheâ??ll always be my little girl. No matter what. Thatâ??s what sheâ??ll always be to me.
    I turned back to Jalice. I had to do this now or never. Maria Carmen saw me and turned and smiled. She walked over to me with the mic and took my hand leading me to where she once was. She handed it to me.
(Me):um, I would like my girlfriend to come up here please.

(Maria Carmen):câ??mon, Jalice! Câ??mon!
      Jalice got up and walked onto the stage. When she came to me I kissed her and hugged her. Everyone joined in on the awww.
(Jalice):so Michaelâ?¦whatâ??s this about?

(Me):oh,um,yeah.*takse her right hand and kneels down to one knee*Jalice I know we havenâ??t known each other every long but I was wonderingâ?¦would you do me the honor of being my life? So Iâ??m askingâ?¦will you marry me?

(Jalice):oh, Michaelâ?¦yes! Yes Iâ??ll marry you.*hugs me*

(Maria Carmen):Iâ??m gonna have a mama now arenâ??t I daddy?

(Me):*hugs her and Jalice*the best mother for the best daughter.*kiss jalcie and kisses Maria Carmen on her head*

(Jalice):and the best fiance for the longest time for the best daughter anyone could ever want.

(Maria Carmen):I got nothing.
   Everyone cracked up. Even me and Jalice along with Maria Carmenâ??s friends.
(Kelly):well, as if I hear enough of you from, Mary.(Maria Carmenâ??s nickname for her)

(Sarah&Maria):yeah.
(Maria Carmen):*take the mic from me*well Iâ??m sorry Iâ??m so much of a bother  to you.

(Maria):we love you because of it.

(Sarah):yeah. Donâ??t take it hard Mary.

(Maria Carmen):I love u guys too.*looks at Jalice*and I love you, mama.

(Jalice):*crying*thank you, sweetie.

(Maria Carmen):*looks at me*and I wuv you the most daddy.

(Me):I wuv you also, M.C.
      So this is a start of the best days of my life. For my fiance, Jalice. And my baby girl, Maria Carmen always being there. I will never lose them. For as long as I live.
   Later that night I was the first one to get in the bed. After we dropped Jalice off I was so tired. Maria Carmen was in the bathroom. Sheâ??s acting like a girl now taking long in the bathroom. She came out in her Bugs bunny pajamas Janet got her for her 8th birthday. Many of her old clothes still fit her. Sheâ??s that skinny. She got crawledâ?¦more like jumped into bed. She pulled the covers over herself and rolled over into my waiting arms. I placed the arms sheâ??s laying on hand behind her head. And the other arm went around her. I kissed her goodnight and she feel asleep after kissing my chin and telling me goodnight. I watched her asleep for a little bit till I fell asleep my ownself.
    *that was part 14!!! Part 15 is coming soon!!! Love ya!!!*
-Caitlyn:)

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