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Maria Carmen*12*

Maria Carmen*12*
*this goes to my sister Jalice and my sister Kelly and Maria and also you Kelly and Mimi. Enjoy this chapter.*
   Recap:okay we left off when Michael brung Maria Carmen to the set of â??The Way You Make Me Feelâ?? set. When Michael left Maria Carmen with Tatiana she had a few chioce words for Maria. Then Maria Carmen told her off and went to Michael and told. This is where the story left off. And youâ??ll be suprize who saw it.
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Maria Carmen
   Daddy and me went to that witch. She was acting so innocent when my daddy got there. She turned around and show the look on daddyâ??s face and her fake smile faded.
(Tatiana)*looks at me*

(Me)*Mouthing out your gonna get it*

(Tatiana):*to daddy*Michael whatâ??s up. Your little angel looks like someone upset her.

(Daddy):you know good and well youâ??re the one who set her off, Tatiana.

(Tatiana):what? Thatâ??s a lie, Michael. She just doesnâ??t want to share you with anyone.

(Me):thatâ??s not true!!! Daddy donâ??t believe her!!!

(Tatiana):see that. She doesnâ??t even want you to believe my side of the story. And why would I hurt a little angel like her.

(Me):youâ??re a liar you witch!!!

(Daddy): Maria Carmen Diana Mimi Kelly Nay Nay Breyonna Lilly Nique Angel Katrina JoJo Jalice Carly Kludia Aidrenne Jackson!*looks up at daddy*we do not call anyone that.

(Me):but she is!!!

(Jalice):thatâ??s not the right word for her, sweetie. Sheâ??s a b*cth. But you say that and your in big trouble.

(Daddy):Jalice what are you doing here?

(Jalice):Iâ??m here to watch your work on you music video. And I come to hear little miss bitchy here talking trash about Maria.

(Tatiana):who the hell are you to say I was talking about her?

(Jalice):I know her better then you do.*walks over to Tatiana*

(Tatiana):maybe I did say something about her what are you going to do about it?*she pushes Jalice*

(Me):hey, donâ??t push her!!!

(Tatiana):*bends down to my level*you donâ??t tell me what to do.*mouths out white trash*

(Me):*slaps her in the face*

(Tatiana):*picks me up*

(Jalice):you put her down.

(Tatiana):ohâ?¦who here doesnâ??t belong? Letâ??s see?*points to her*black.*points to daddy*black.*points to me and Jalice*white and white. Ummmâ?¦you 2 donâ??t belong.*drops me*
     When she dropped me I feel on my side. And it hurt. Tears came into my eyes till I started crying. Daddy bent down and picked me up and I hid my face in his shoulder. I heard what sounded like someone being pushed to the ground. I unhid my face and saw Tatiana holding her jaw and I saw Jalice with her fist rubbing it.
(Jalice):hard face to go with a hard head.

(Daddy):Tatiana?

(Tatiana):*sweetly and hoping.*yes Michael?
      She must think daddy will ask her if sheâ??s okay.
(Daddy):your fired.

(Tatiana):WHAT!!!

(Jalice&me):fired!!!

(Tatiana):Iâ??m not going anywhere.
      Chuck the guard come over and picked Tatiana up.
(Chuck):where should I take out the trash, Mr. Jackson?*looks at me and winks*

(Me):*moths out nice one*

(Daddy):*chuckles at us* oh, just throw it out.

(Tatiana):*screaming a lot of thing while Chuck carries her out*

(Me):what a potty mouth.

(Daddy):*rubs his nose with mine*your one to talk.*tickles me under my right arm*

(Me):*laughing*

(Alex):man Michael. Your friend Jalice knows how to punch doesnâ??t she.*looks at me*and you know how to slap. I donâ??t want to get on your bad side.

(Me):then Iâ??ll have to show you*singing*Whoâ??s Bad.

(Alex):*laughing*yeah. Youâ??ll show me whoâ??s bad alright.*to daddy* Michael what are gonna do know? We need someone to replace, Tatiana.

(Daddy):I know.*looks at me*maybe, M.C. here can do it.

(Me):*laughing*daddy, Iâ??m to little.

(Alex):sheâ??s right Michael.*looks at Jalice*maybe you can replace her.

(Jalice):oh, um, not meâ?¦Iâ??m not good.

(Me):Jalice you donâ??t have to dance you just have to keep walking away from daddy. And when he does hisâ??s â??Hee Heeâ?? thing you stops and wai till he does that once then he starts to sing and you walk away again. And at the end of the video you think his gone but then he comes behind you and you hug. And thatâ??s it.

(Alex):you have a good remembering brain, Maria Carmen.

(Me):I know.

(Daddy):what about it, Jal? You wanna do it?

(Jalice):well if itâ??s that easy?

(Me):trust me. It is.

(Jalice):then alright.
      
(Daddy):great. Go into Tatianaâ??s changing room and change into her dress she was going to wear.

(Jalice):okay.*goes off to the witchâ??s room*

(Daddy):and you stay right in this chair and watch the video.*places me in his chair*

(Me):daddy.

(Daddy):itâ??ll be over soon, baby girl.*kisses my head*I promises.
       When Jalice came out of the dressing room everybody who was a boyâ??s moth was hanging open. She had the figure for the dress. And like daddy said it wasnâ??t long either. It was like it started from when she says â??You knock me off my feet now baby! WHOOO!â?? to where they hug. They were to where that happen. When the director said action they hug. And then what shocked me when they pulled back dady lend in and kissed Jalice. My moth hung open. This is one thing I know that wasnâ??t in the script.
      Back at home I got washed up but daddy helped me get ready buy washing my hair. I grew out of my night gowns so I just wear some of Daddyâ??s old T-Shirts and their big on me. Iâ??m wearing his Mickey Mouse shirt. But I put my pink pajama bottoms on. I crawled into bed and waited for daddy to get out of the shower. When daddy got into bed I rolled over so I was laying my head on his chest. He placed his hand behind my head and wrapped his other arm around me and pulled me to him. I loved when daddy did that it makes me feel so safe to be his baby girl. And thatâ??ll Iâ??ll stay.
    But I had to ask daddy one thing. Even thought I shouldnâ??t I just canâ??t get what happen today near the ending of the music video. Does daddy love Jalice more then he says he does? If they get married I would so love that! I already love Jalice. Sheâ??s so nice and caring like sheâ??s my real mommy. I felt daddyâ??s chest move up and back down. I saw he was asleep now. He always gets tired because he works so hard on his music videos. But he makes the best music videos. I remember watching â??Thrillerâ?? with him and I got so scared I wet my first big girl panties and cried because I thought daddy was mad at me for doing that. But he was very understanding. Like he always is. So Iâ??m not really allowed to watch â??Thrillerâ?? because he still thinks itâ??s too scary for me. I giggled a little bit and started poking him in the chest. He grunted. I poked harder. Whisper, Daddy, as I did it. He opened one of his eyes.
(Daddy):M.C. what is it?*yawns*

(Me):I want to ask you something.

(Daddy):*closes his eye*baby can it wait till morning?

(Me):*kicks his leg*no. now daddy or Iâ??m not letting go to sleep.

(Daddy):fine. Daddyâ??s listening.

(Me):do you think Jalice is pretty?

(Daddy):*opens his eyes*what? Whyâ??d you ask that?

(Me):because you and Jalice kissed. Are you guys getting married?

(Daddy):M.C. it was a accident. We both didnâ??t mean to kiss like we did.

(Me):daddy your lieing to me.
(Daddy):Iâ??m not lieing, baby. It was a accident. Me and her both didnâ??t mean to kiss. We just got to cought up in the moment. And me and Jalice isnâ??t getting married. Okay, baby girl. Now go back to sleep.*starts closing eyes again*

(me):okay. But you never answered my first question.

(Daddy):if I answer this one can I go to sleep?(sarcastically)

(Me):yes daddy.

(Daddy):and will you?

(Me):yes.

(Daddy):shoot.

(Me):do you think Jalice is pretty?

(Daddy):yes. Very pretty, baby girl. Now go to sleep.

(Me):okay. Daddy. I love you.*kisses his chin*

(Daddy):*kisses my head*love you more, baby.
     I watch daddy fall back asleep. He needs a break at times. But he loves his job and he always finds a way to speen it with me. Daddyâ??s chest went up and down. I giggled again and settled back. Daddy pulled me a little closer to him. I smiled and snuggled into his chest. In no time at all I feel asleep. Itâ??s good to have Michael Jackson as a daddy. And I love it each and everyday.
  *That was part 12!!! Part 13 will be here soon! Love you all!*
-Caitlyn:)

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