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Music, Me and Michael Jackson (Part 14)
Hi heres part 14 of my story. This time i have some more ideas which will make it a bit more interesting. I'd like to dedicate this to Michael Jackson and my friend Tim. ENJOY!! ------------------------------------------------------------------- Me: Hey Marlon what are you doing here? Marlon: Well i didnt have the key to me and Michael's room and i thought he had it and i was expecting him to be here and just as i was about to knock you guys showed up. Annabelle: Hi Marlon. Marlon: Hi Annabelle Annabelle: Good thing you didnt open the door or...uh nevermind. Me: What? Annabelle: You'll see. Me: OOOH! A surprise! I LOVE surprises! Michael: Ya we know. They all laughed and but i didnt really know what was so funny. So Annabelle gets out her key and hands me mine and she opens the door. Me: WOW! This room is NICE! Annabelle: Mmhmm we originally had Cherry's room but it was too small and i told Cherry that there were rats in here so she begged me to take the room. I said no at first but then she paid me! Me: COOL! How much did you get? Annabelle: $30 Me: DANG that's awesome! Annabelle: And since youre my favorite sister you get half. Me: Thanks! First i get a picture and now i get 15 bucks! Annabelle: Picture? What picture? Marlon: Michael drew Rachel a picture. Annabelle: Oh cool! Wait. Its not of porn is it? Me and Michael: EWW NO! Annabelle: Just checking, so what did you draw? I get the picture out of my bag and i already had put it inside the frame. And Annabelle looks like she likes it a lot. Annabelle: Michael this is so GROOVY!! Michael: Thanks if Rachel hadnt told me ideas of what to do when im bored i would have NEVER drawn it, well at least right then and there! Me: *blushes and smiles* Annabelle and i start unpacking. Marlon and Michael were watching TV. Annabelle hands me something to put into the closet. Me: You can put it in there youre closer to it. Annabelle: Uh but i dont want to get up right now. Me: Gosh youre lazy fine i'll put it in there. Annabelle: Thank you. I walk over to the closet, kind of pissed off from how selfish Annabelle was being, and i slide open the door. ???: BOO! Me: Oh my GOD!! DONNA?!?! Donna: HI!! I faint. Its been FOREVER since i've seen her. I only fainted from happiness not from being lightheaded or something. A few seconds later i feel mouth to mouth on me. Once i open my eyes first i see Michael and then i hear people scream "SHES WAKING UP!!" I dont freak out like they do, i only smile cuz i was looking into Michael's chocolate brown eyes. Soon i feel a slap on the face not like something when a person gets angry at someone else, but a slap to wake me up. Michael: Rachel? Rachel? Can you hear me? Me: *dreamily* Uh huh. Michael: Oh thank Jehovah! Right before he turns his head to talk to Marlon and Annabelle, i take his head and kiss him. I heard gasps behind Michael but i was only thinking about him. There were bells going off in my head telling me that i was in love. This wasnt the first time Michael had saved me. The first time was at his BBQ 3 years ago. He all of a sudden pulls back from me and drags me up. Michael: Rachel are you o.k? Me: I feel better than ever. Marlon: But you just fainted! Me: I know but i feel WONDERFUL! Annabelle: What the hell was that right there?!? Me: What? Annabelle: You just made out with Michael! Me: So? Annabelle: SO! Michael: Uh shes probably still looney from just being conscious. Annabelle: Ya youre probably right Michael. So Rachel you saw whos here? Me: Yup ME!! Annabelle: *laughs* Once again, NOT YOU! Me: Oh YA! Hi Donna! Donna: Hi Rachel! Sorry i gave you quite a shock there but it was the only way i could surprise you! Me: Its o.k. if there is one person in the world whos gonna make me faint its you! Donna: AWW i feel so special! We gave each other a hug and then someone taps me on the shoulder. Annabelle: Theres someone else here you know? Me: This time is it me? They all laugh. What? I was being serious! Annabelle: Why do you think its you all the time? Me: I dunno cuz i got here about an hour ago. Annabelle: Whatever Me: So where is this mystery person? Annabelle: Look around. You might find him. Me: AHH! So its a 'he'? And 'he's' in this very room i presume Annabelle: I never said that. Me: So he's not. Annabelle: I never said that either. Me: HA HA you think youre SO funny using my little catch phrase. *scoff* So do any of them know? Annabelle: Only me and Donna? Me: Hmm o.k. then well before i go on this "man hunt" i have to use the detectives room. And away i go! They all laugh from my detective joke. Gosh i could be the next Detective Clouseau (from the "Pink Panther" series which are hilarious movies!) I enter the bathroom and lock the door and when i open the toilet seat, The shower curtains open. Me: DONNY!! Donny: Hey surprised you didnt i? Him i didnt faint to. Its cuz i see him a little bit more than Donna but i was JUST as excited to see him. I unlock the door and i see Annabelle, Marlon, Donna, and Michael standing up against the door. Once Donny steps out of the bathtub i take him out of the bathroom and give him a GIANT hug! Donny: Hey doll-face missed me didnt ya? Me: *lets go of him* Dont call me "doll-face!" And i did miss you man! Donny: *turns around* Hey Michael, Marlon good to see you guys! Michael: Good to see you too man! Marlon: Ya the only one whos missing now is Marie. Donny: That reminds me, MARIE you can come out now! Marie comes out of the bathroom. I guess she was hiding in there too. Me: Geez Annabelle! How many people do you have hiding in here! Annabelle: OH i almost forgot that the Carpenters are here! Me: REALLY? Annabelle: NO thats all. Marie: Do i get a hug Rachel? Me: Yesss. I give her a nice hug she was only a year younger than me but she was already almost taller than me. Me: O.k. now i want a group hug. Come on share the love people! We all share a group hug. I was so happy that all of my closest friends were here AND my closest family. I knew this was going to be the best vacation EVER! ---------------------------------------------------------------- What did you think? I told you i had better ideas. BTW Donna, Rachel's cousin, is from "That 70's Show" I felt like putting that in here cuz i LOVE the show!! PLZ VOTE and like always i want at least 10!
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