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Adopted by michael jackson (part 1)

Main characters: Michael (29) *bad era*, Elizabeth (Eli) (13), Chris (14), Jane (13), Edward(Ed) (15), Robert (2)

Hey everyoneâ?¦ these r the main characters and Elisabeth is Ed's and Robert's sis and her bff Jane is the sister of Chrisâ?¦
So here we goâ?¦ enjoy 
Xxx Elizabeth xxx 
we all were hanging together until we come home and find my parents on the floor with blood all around themâ?¦ I bent on my parents and my Robert comes to me cryingâ?¦
I hug him and lean to my parentsâ?¦
Then I feel some footsteps behind me but I donâ??t pay attentionâ?¦
Jane, Ed, Chris: careful Eli!!
I then feel some one putting his hands around my neck and the edge of his knife on my neck
Man (to Jane, Chris, Ed): don't speak a word or she's gone.
Jane (hugging Robert): okâ?¦ but please leave her..
Man: no noâ?¦ you all come with me in the carâ?¦
Another man appears and he tries driving us to the carâ?¦ we all go to the car with our hands and legs tied except Robert'sâ?¦ they threw us in the backseats and the 2 men go in the front seatsâ?¦
There was a knife near me so I was trying to say to Robert to cut the ropes but I could not speak from grief!!! I was so distracted from the reality and I was crying so hardâ?¦ And so was Edâ?¦ we loved them so muchâ?¦ Jane and Chris tried to calm us down but we could not believe what just happened.

When we arrived the men were pushing us and pulling mine and Jane's hair and they were treating us very badly and even they were beating my small brotherâ?¦ but I didnâ??t care for all of thatâ?¦ I was still thinking about my parentsâ?¦ they then took us to a long dark passage and threw us in a room at the end of the passageâ?¦ I sat there with my legs near my breasts and my hands around my legs (as if im cold)â?¦ then Robert and Ed came and hug meâ?¦
Ed (crying badly): its ok Eliâ?¦ thatâ??s their fateâ?¦ we can't change itâ?¦ we have to deal with it Eliâ?¦

Jane: He's right Eliâ?¦ what you are doing to yourself wont helpâ?¦
 
Chris: This is having a bad effect on Robertâ?¦ he's scaredâ?¦ C'mon Eliâ?¦ my best friend isnâ??t like thatâ?¦ I know she's really braveâ?¦ (giving me a hug)

Eli (tearing up): You guys donâ??t understandâ?¦ they are my parentsâ?¦ How am I supposed to live without them!? All these damn people wanted is that they didnâ??t want dad to win the caseâ?¦ This aint fairâ?¦ Why aint there peace in the world!!

(Crying really loudly)

Jane: honey I know its difficult foâ?¦

(Man opens the door and Robert out of fear comes running to me)

Man: I better not hear any sound. Is that understood?! (Angry face)

We all hug each other and sit in one cornerâ?¦ we then put our heads on each other and I have Robert in my lap and we sleep

I was the first one who wakes up and I cry but really slowlyâ?¦ Robert wakes up and sits beside me and starts taping on my shoulderâ?¦ Jane then wakes upâ?¦

Thats my first story... sorry for any spelling mistakes... i hope u like it... im nt gonna publish part 2 until i get 10+ votes so that i know if u luv it or no

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