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Smooth Criminal part 1
-Marie<3 (Michael is not famous in this story) i know it seems like im always making michael out to be bad but im not i know Michael is a good man this is just for story purposes. My name is Jade Nicole Jones. Some people call me JJ.I'm a black & Asain lawyer, one of the best as all the magazines, newspapers and tvs have put it. I recently just wrapped up a big case of a murder who killed many innocent lives trying to say he's innocent but thanks to me was found guilty on all accounts and will serve 134 years in prison or in other words life without parol. It's the late 80's (1987) Crime is going rapid. gangs everyone on every cornor. I live in a quiet neighborhood , a lot of white people where I live very little black. I like it. I'm not married nor do i have children. Would i like some? Of course... Me:*on the phone with my bestfriend* Meg:You need a man. Me:Shut up... Meg:You do, you need to losen up a bit. Me:I am loosen. Meg:Ever since you became "The biggest lawyer" you became a bit uptight. Me:I am not uptight. Meg:Even the way you talk... Me:Educated? Meg:White... Me:Meg when's the last time you had a date? Meg:Last week and i was married unlike you. Me:Shut up. Meg:I have a dare for you. Me:What? Meg:Go to the south and hang at the night club on 79th street. Me;Uhh no people get killed over there almost everynight , i will not be stepping anywhere near the neighborhood. Meg:Puss... Me:Don't know me that. I just want to stay alive thank you... Meg:Oh i knew you was going to deny...just like always. Me:You know what...i'll go. Tomorrows Friday and I'm off Im going. Meg:Yay. wear something hot not your lawyer suites. Me:Whats wrong with that? Meg:Your trying to get laid not doing the mans taxes. Me:*laughs* shut up. I'm getting tired i'm going to call you tomorrow. Meg:Alright have fun tomorrow. Me:Oh I won't... Why Would I let Meg talk me into going to that part of the neighborhood? People get killed every single day. Gangs live all over this neighborhood. I am scared out of my mind. tomorrow needs to come very slow... The next day came fast its already 7 at night... Me:*on the phone with Meg* Meg:What are you wearing? Me: my skirt with my very nice pink blouse and suite jacket. Meg:Oh my... are you going to a funeral? Me:Whats wrong with that? Its all I got Meg:EVERYTHING! please don't tell me where your wearing stockings. Me:Fine i won't Meg:uhh kill me now. Me: I'll have you know this skirt has caught many guys attentions. Meg:Yeah the ugly. Me:Shut up . I have you know I can get a guy. Meg:Not dressed like you're running for congress. Me:Its nothing wrong with the way I dress. Meg:Your 25 dressing like your 45... Me:Look i'm already going to this club. You better shut up. Meg:My mouth is shut. Have fun tonight. Me:Ohh i won't. Meg:Love you... Me:Feelings mutual *hangs up* I got in car and drove to the south to th club on 79th. I saw grown black men on every cornor just standing there, prostitutes walking with just a bra and shorts... I told myself i was just going to go in this club have a drink of water and leave. now way im staying more than a hour. I walked in the club it was a little old club, had a band playing some good music. The club old but new at the same time. Everyone looked sweaty and hot but good at the sametime. I just looked out of place. I sat at the bar next to a men dressed in a white suit. He had a blue patch on his arm and a white fedora covering up his face a little All i really saw was his lips, chin and hand. It was a black male with white skin. You can tell he had a skin condition because of the patches of brown spots on his hand. Bartender:Drink mam? Me:Oh just water please... Bartender:*hands me the water* You from around here? Me:Me? oh no I live up there in umm... Bartender:By the whites? Me:Yeah...how'd you know? Bartender:You can tell your out of place here. Me:Oh sorry this was a dare for me to come down here. Bartender:Oh well some risk you took. Me:That doesn't make me a have good feeling. Bartender:Sorry, excuse me *talking to other customers* I was just sitting there looking around. The man beside me did not move but he seemed like a nice enough man. Dressed well might as well talk to him... Me:Excuse me... I'm Jade. Man:Hello... Me:Umm whats your name? Man:Mike... Me:Oh nice to you meet you Michael. Man:hmm. Me:Nice club huh? Man:yeah... Bartender:don't pay no attention to Michael he doesn't say much. never has... All of a sudden all you heard was "bang,bang,bang" Eveyone dropped down to the ground including me. Gun shots were everywhere I crawled to the door but people were all trampling over me. I felt i was going to die. One guy took a match and set the club on fire and i had no way out all the doors were blocked the men were still shooting. This was the end for me... A man dressed in all black even in a black mask came over to me and pointed his gun by now everyone had left the club. Killer:Say bye bitch *points the gun* Me:Plase don't kill me. I'll give you money. He was about to pull the trigger when I heard a gun shot from behind him. He fell down to his knees and then on the ground beside me. Me:OH MY ! I saw Mike standing behind him still pointing the gun. I thought he was going to kill me next when he put the gun down and held his hand out to help me up. Me:Um,um Thank you... Michael:You could've have gotten killed. Me:I know,I know i didn't know what to do I've never been in a situation like this before .Thank you so much for saving my life. Michael:I know who you are Jade that big lawyer... Me;Yeah... oh how can i ever repay you? Michael:I don't need you to do anything... Me:No please I have plenty of money. Michael:Look do you know who I am? Me:Nope. Michael:I'm the Smooth Criminal... TBC...
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