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Andy
Listen, you just need to work on your grammer and your spelling. It's hard to picture scenes if your not using the right words. Also, try to come up with something new and inventive. Try alternate universes, or changing the ending to a life. Here, since it is a MJ website, maybe Michael didn't really die? Or maybe do the back-story to the music video to BAD? Try to juggle things around until you find something you like. Also, try to go for something fresh, and new. Honestly, reading the same types of romance stories are getting boring. The only stories I re-read are the ones where Michael's actually Michael. Not some romantizied Romeo, looking for Juliet. He was stronger than that. Just some tips to spice up the stories that get posted on here.
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